Monday, November 2, 2009
River Flow
(I wrote this poem while overlooking the Columbia River in the Columbia River Gorge outside of Portland)
The sound of the river in my ear
Takes away my breath, the bad, and the fear
The flowers surround it
Surround me and the view
To know that it's safe
Calming and true
The sun shines around me
As all the trees sway
In the breeze of the river
We see here today
The day is here
But stopped in the mind
As the river is flowing
Front, side, and behind
The boats are floating
And jetting across
You must keep on moving
But you want to pause
In the warmth of the sun
The breeze brings a shiver
But it's calm and quiet
In the flow of the river
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14 comments:
I can feel it. I can hear it.
i'm blown away.
stacy
Whoa, incredible!
I always think that the truly talented writers, are able to transport you to the time and place they are writing about, and you do that without a doubt! Keep it up for all of us to enjoy. I love you and all of your poems. Love, Grandma Judy
great job!!! tht waz awesome! write more please! :)
Hi Kasidy, you are truly an amazing 10-year old. WOW! I must say that I really like the Soda Song but River Flow is awesome.
Keep it up girl! :o)
my favorite so far!
kasidy,
i LOVE the columbia river ... what a beautiful place to write! and your words are lovely <3
thanks for sharing,
pam hembree
folsom, ca
Post more! I love reading your poems. When you're rich and famous, can you buy me a mansion? Love, Sissy
Keep up the good work, you have a way with words that draws the reader in. Isn't it about time for another kooking show?
I really liked this poem miss Kasidy. I randomly found this poem by randomly typing a name in which turned out was yours
Good job Kasidy! and Happy Bday!
I remember when you were 3 and you pretended your name was Sara so you wouldn't get in trouble...lol hope that i am not embarrassing you :-) Have a very special day, you are a very special girl!! Love Andrea and all the Hills!
Great Job Kas!!!!!
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